[KingEros]

Originally Posted by imaginative

good story. But your english needs some brushing up, Mr asst director in mnc.

"came to work with a normal skirt"
shd be "came to work IN a normal skirt"

"the number of breast that I has saw"
shd be "the number of breasts that I have seen"

My friend ... the list goes on:

"as she need to arrange some of the files in my office cabinet"
should have been "as she needed to arrange some files in my office cabinet"

"I was pretenting to be looking at emails"
should have been "I was pretending to be reading emails"

"but actually my eyes were zooming into her chest"
should have been "but actually, my eyes were stealing glances of her chest"

"forgot to tell us guys"
should have been "forgot to tell you guys"

"at this point of time"
should have been "at this point in time" or "at that point of time"

"am I thinking too much into this"
should have been "am I thinking too much" or "am I reading too much into this"

"since there is a free show on going"
should have been "since there is a free show going on" or "since there is a free show on display"

BUT still doesn't mean he's not an assistant director lor ... coz he may well be working in a Chinese, Taiwanese, Japanese or Korean MNC, no?

Originally Posted by chewychewy

Will continue to write this story of mine so that bros here will not make the same mistake like me.

Also, he may well be deliberately writing this way to inspire all of us to improve our own English lor.