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Originally Posted by machoman
No doubt about it, my gut instincts were correct when I came across your story. I like the above passage.
You are indeed a brilliant writer, one of the best in this forum. 
Kudos for the superb detailed description of the sexual conquest of your "drinking companion".  |
machoman, you are too generous with your praises. I have read many other works in SBF, and I feel that there are just too many good writers in here. However since this is the first time I am attempting to pen down an experience, I am just hoping that the response will be good, as testament of my writing skills.
But sadly, after more than 3000 views I still do not have the kind of response or feedback from the other brothers and sisters. I do not mean just in the form of reputation points, but as any story teller would probably know, having people acknowledging your work is the most important inspiration of all. It is akin to having your paintings hung onto the walls of a gallery that nobody visits
Can somebody tell me what am I lacking in my writing style?